Saturday, February 5, 2011

Rhetorical Analysis Thesis

AIDS and India is an effective argument to convince the average citizen to devote their time and money to spread the education and awareness of AIDS because it uses personal stories, statistics, and well organized information from experts to create an eagerness to act from the general public. 
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  1. Elizabeth RicksFebruary 9, 2011 at 11:37 PM

    Great start! I might suggest changing "an effective argument which convinces average citizens..." just a suggestion but I think it makes it flow better.

    -ER

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  2. Megan BahrFebruary 10, 2011 at 12:09 PM

    Mmmm...it does sound a lot nicer! I'll definitely take that into consideration! Thanks! :]

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